我想时间停止。 [I wish time would stop.]

:) i couldn't sleep so i tried practising my mandarin. i wrote this:


我想时间停止。
我不想长大了。
我想留住青春。
时间走得太快。
我想时间停止。


translation:
i wish time would stop.
i don't want to grow old.
i want to stay young.
time is going too fast.
i wish time would stop.


x) is my chinese correct? XD GOODNIGHT WORLD :D